Help with my cliched essay totally lost

<p>Would anyone be willing to read/critique my college essay?</p>

<p>yeah, send it over I’ll read it and give you a critique within the hour</p>

<p>Send it over, and I’ll read and critque. </p>

<p>Give me the prompt, and I can do it pretty quickly for you so you can edit and find direction.</p>

<p>anyone else?</p>

<p>Why would you want to submit an essay that you admit is cliched? I will take a look if you would like an opinion.</p>