Help with my Common App?

Hey guys, I was just wondering if someone could take a look at my common app (especially for grammar)

I’m not sure if I tell enough about myself in it! :frowning:

I am in high school but use a website called paper rater before I turn in an essay because it may catch those grammar mistakes.

Thanks! I’ll definitely take a look at that

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Have you used grammarly.com it does a pretty good job catching grammar issues