Help with my essay please!

<p>I am applying for transfer this fall to Cornell, and I would really appreciate it if anyone who had experience with this could take a look at my essay... I'm sending this in in a week, so please help me if you could. I do not feel like posting it here... But if you think you may be able to help critique it by providing constructive criticism of any kind, please leave your email address, I would love to send you a copy of it. Thanks!</p>

<p><a href="mailto:a.sparticus@verizon.net">a.sparticus@verizon.net</a> subject it "cornell essay" or something so I don't do something dumb like deleting it.</p>

<p>Attach it as a Word document so I can send you tracked changes.</p>

<p>wow thanks for the fast reply... I'm sending it now
Thanks again</p>

<p>send it to me on private message on this thing</p>

<p>Hold on a sec</p>