Help with my essay?

College Essays
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<p>I wrote my common app essay but I'm not sure about the direction it went in. Is anyone willing to read it?</p>

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<p>Desperation is seeping through my veins</p>

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<p>I wouldn’t mind giving it a look.</p>

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<p>ill read it, PM me</p>

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<p>Sure thing! Thanks!</p>

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<p>i’ll read it, PM me!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it :)</p>

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<p>sure i’ll help</p>

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<p>Thank you all!</p>