Help with my Harvard supplement essay

College Essays
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<p>bump if ur interested in reading</p>

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<p>I’m interested in critiquing it</p>

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<p>i am interested<br>
i will send u back my review</p>

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<p>will give you critique</p>

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<p>dude im at your service</p>

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<p>alright sent to everyone except jzhang621, it won’t get through i think the server traffic probably ROSE for some reason</p>

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<p>actually the essays too many characters for a pm so i need everyone’s email</p>

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<p>my email: <a href="mailto:mhang100yay@gmail.com">mhang100yay@gmail.com</a></p>

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<p>me .</p>

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<p>bumppppp…</p>

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<p>red herring</p>

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<p>not sure what “bump” means - but I’ve already graduated with a Master’s so would be glad to offer feedback. If you send me your email, I’ll be happy to send back mine, but not comfortable posting private email here.</p>