Help with my Transfer Essay Please!!! :D

<p>Im applying to a University as a transfer student who was academically suspended for poor GPA and i was wondering if someone wouldn't mind reading my transfer admission essay and give some pointers </p>

<p>PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE =)</p>

<p>bumpsy-daisy</p>

<p>I’ll take a look at it.</p>

<p>Thank You Chad!! Ill PM you it :D</p>