Help with Personal Statement

Transfer Students UC Transfers
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<p>Hey Everyone!</p>

<p>The Personal statement is the most important portion of the UC Application process; you are given 1000 words to describe yourself and this is the portion of the application that sets YOU apart from the rest of the crowd. I have worked for admissions and records, for about 2 years at both UC Berkeley and UCLA while helping with UCI admissions on the side.</p>

<p>I help look over applications for UC Berkeley UCLA and UCI admissions. I have probably read over a thousand of these essays, and would love to help anyone who needs help revising their UC Essays feel free to message me or to ask me any questions</p>

<p>Thanks and good luck to all you prospective UC transfers!</p>

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<p>I’m going to UCI / UCD and I was wondering if someone can read my personal statement and tell me what you think / be critical about it! my email is andrew.ludwig91 @ gmail . com the spaces are so that my email isn’t ********* anyways. email me and ill send you my personal statement. thanks :slight_smile: I’ll give you more information about major, etc. when i email you my statement.</p>

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<p>@ucadvice can I pm you mine after I write it? ill try to finish it this weekend</p>

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<p>I wouldn’t trust UCAdvice. only 2 posts</p>