Help with the common app essay: person's influence

<p>Can anyone be willing to read my essay and give some feed back plz!</p>

<p>^okay. PM me the essay. :)</p>

<p>^okay. PM me the essay.</p>

<p>whatever be your essay and whoever it be about, don’t forget to talk more about the influence he/she had on you; more about how you changed than merely talking about that person…</p>

<p>Sure! PM me the essay! :)</p>