Help with this plz

<p>Hi, I was wondering if any parent would be willing to read my app essay. I posted this thread in admissions but almost no one answered. If you're willing to read it, I would reallty appreciate it, I'll PM you. Thanx</p>

<p>bumpy bump, sorry, but I could really use some more readers</p>

<p>You can PM it to me unless it's for the UC system. I am not looking at essays for the UC system since I am not really familiar with what they are looking for.</p>