Help with UW personal statement?

Anyone have time to revise my personal statement? Currently wrote about 500 words and I still have more to write. I just want to see if I’m going towards the right direction with it and following all the requirements for the essay thus far. Hope someone could assist!

Thanks!

Try tutor.com. You may be able to get a free trial and the writing center will help you edit your pieces.

@lukepeoples‌ thanks for the recommendation. Checked and they didn’t have any free trials…

I can do it! My dream school is also UW lol. You tryna go to Seattle campus?

@elitelow‌ Sweet… Yeah I’m trying to go to the Seattle campus. Forgot to say I’m actually trying to transfer so I don’t know if you are familiar with the prompts given for transfer applicants.

For the transfer application, you’ll want to focus in on your intended major and demonstrating a real plan for completion of your intended major within a reasonable time frame. For transfers this is key - they don’t want to admit someone who is going to take years to graduate. Also, be sure that it highlights what you are doing outside of the classroom and how much of your time is spent doing it (example: if you work full or part-time, highlight that). If you’d like to send me a private message I may be able to help with other questions.