<p>Hi Tufts is my top choice and I really want to convey that in my why tufts supplement. I haven't visited the school because my parents say it's too expensive but I am sure that I love the school and want to go there next year. Can you please edit my Why Tufts supplement. Also, It's 260 words so I need help cutting it down. Thanks!</p>
<p>From the moment I began looking into Tufts I realized that it truly is a unique place where students are smart, curious, and enjoy learning. Students are excited about learning and trying new things because Tufts creates an environment that encourages people to try new things and find their passion. This is appealing to me because I realize that I still dont know a lot about myself, and want to use college as a chance to experiment and try out new things. The experimental college at Tufts is just one example of students having fun through learning. There are many classes in the experimental college that excite me such as Bioethics: Contemporary Perspectives, Human Rights and Climate Change, and The Evolutionary Origins of Religion. Although I want to major in biology and these classes dont directly overlap with that major, they still interest me and would help supplement my education. I feel that Tufts is the perfect size for a college because its big enough that I would constantly be meeting new people, but its small enough that it would be easy to get involved and get to know my professors. There are also many clubs at Tufts that I would love to get involved in such as the Persian Students Association, the Quittich team, the Pre-Medical Society, and the Elections Commission. Tufts creates a community where it is common to be dorky, zealous, and fun. I truly feel that I could find a home at Tufts, and I would love the chance to become part of the Tufts community.</p>
<p>the 50-100 word limit is a GUIDELINE. you can write as long as you want! they want a clear and concise response though, so if it’s possible to shorten it while maintaining your voice that’s great!</p>
<p>also as a word of advice: avoid saying “things.” be as SPECIFIC as possible, and you will find yourself with a shorter, sharper essay</p>
<p>You don’t need to use such wordy transitions between topics - this isn’t an essay for English class! Just say what you like :). Also, just a note: periods and commas go inside quotation marks. Good luck!</p>
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<p>That’s totally true, but we give you that guideline for a reason. To everyone working on the Why Tufts: you don’t need to list every reason, just the ones that resonate most strongly within you. We intentionally guide you towards brevity because we don’t need you to be comprehensive - just personal. </p>
<p>Please use your own judgment, but I honestly believe you could end your answer with “help supplement my education” and you wouldn’t be losing a thing.</p>
<p>Thanks hungryhippo and broadwaybaby! I made those changes and I’m a lot happier with it!
DanAdmiss, for my second supplement i’m very happy with it, but it’s 480 words. I know that’s a lot longer than it’s supposed to be, but I feel like it all sheds light on how my community and family influence me. Should I still cut it down a little?</p>
<p>This is on a different subject, but does anyone know if ED II is binding even if you realize you can’t afford the school? Tufts is my top choice, and I know I want to go there. But even if I get in, I won’t be able to attend Tufts if the financial aid package isn’t enough, simply because my family can’t afford it. Is there a clause in the ED II agreement that allows you to deny admission if you later find out you can’t afford it? I read the other forums about this, but didn’t find an absolute answer and was wondering if anyone knew.</p>
<p>Yes, I believe you can say no to the offer of admission if the financial aid package isn’t sufficent. The same principles apply for EDII. If they haven’t given you enough money, then I believe you can refuse the offer. </p>
<p>Good luck fellow EDII applicant! Hope we’re both Jumbos soon! :)</p>
<p>DesiCollegeGal is correct - but the number of students we lose that way is extremely small. No more than a handful between both rounds of early decision. It is extremely unlikely you’d need to do that if admitted. </p>
<p>@Ronniedab - If you can cut it down without losing something essential, you should. If you can’t, then don’t.</p>
<p>Thanks Desicollegegal! Good luck with your EDII application! I hope to see you at Tufts next year!
Thanks Dan! I have made my final edits and I am happy with the length and the content.</p>