Help!

<p>Hi everyone. I'm an international student that just came to California about a year ago. The application process is scarying the heck out of me x_X. I was just wondering if anyone would mind taking a look at my essay for the UC schools. Thanks in advance~</p>

<p>In my opinion,u Should better get ur essay read by ur parents or ur school teacher(obiviously the english teacher..)..
Dont post it on online to anyone without ur trust....u can post it after u hav sent it.......u know my reason for sayin so....(it wont b considerd ur original work then....ppl r bound to copy ur essay....let them try themselves n ur essay will b unique then.........)..:)...</p>

<p>True true, thank you so much for the advice :)</p>