Help??

College Essays
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<p>i just finished my first draft for my common app and im trying to get into top schools.</p>

<p>can you tell me what you think of the essay??</p>

<p>i have decent grades and 1430 sat but am trying to stress my ec's
i think there the strongest part of my app so tell me what you think :)</p>

<p>be honest
thanks</p>

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<p>bump*******</p>

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<p>I’m an '08er, but I’m applying to just the UCs, so I can look over your essay if you’d like.</p>

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<p>I’ll take a looksy.</p>

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<p>thanks any senior member? someone who is already in college?</p>