Help!

College Essays
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<p>anyone willing to give me some criticism on my common app essays?</p>

<p>i'm applying to cornell (my first choice), university at buffalo, university of rochester, harvard (just for kicks and giggles) and maybe johns hopkins with this.</p>

<p>thanks!</p>

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<p>Send it over (college freshman; established CC user). I’m on a long winter break and bored. :)</p>