Help!

<p>I really would like to attend the University of Rochester but my financial aid package was too low. </p>

<p>I had a meeting with my counselor and she said to write an appeal to the scholarship committee.</p>

<p>I was wondering if anyone had any tips or guidelines that I should consider when writing it.</p>

<p>out of a cost of 54730,
I got a 10,000/year scholarship
4,000 from TAP
and 5500 in loans,
this still leaves a huge gap, that's even larger than my parents income!</p>

<p>I don't know what to do!!!!!!! </p>

<p>any feedback?!?!</p>