<p>Prompt #1 (freshman applicants)</p>
<p>Describe the world you come from for example, your family, community or school and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.</p>
<p>Prompt #2 (all applicants)</p>
<p>Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are?</p>
<p>the outline:
prompt 1:
paragraph:
1. how my mom made me study, etc
2. my dad got me involved in my major
3. how my school influenced me to chase my dreams
4. umm one more random idea please?!?! (lol)</p>
<p>EDIT: my major is pharmacology
btw 2 things:
1. i made a aspirin in one of my classes in high school. should i include that. (it was sort of a success)
2. is biotechnology related to pharmacy? (just wondering.. i think they are, but i wanted to check.. ill also be googling it.. but give me ur opinions!)</p>
<p>prompt 2:
i have learned the bass guitar and im still a basic learner, but it has helped me understand things about myself. i had always felt i was musically-challenged. i never listened to rock music, or for that part, at least music that included the bass. one day i picked it up, and started to play it. its a great thing. i can even play the National Anthem and happy birthday, without looking at the chord or the tabs or even the guitar stings and frets!. (blah blah blah!)</p>
<p>i know its okay.. but what do you people say..
i know im gonna be asking my counelors and all, every english teacher on campus and all, but just wanted to make sure im on the right path.</p>
<p>so give me all you got..</p>
<p>i want to apply to UCSD, UCLA, and UCB.. but my first goal is UCSD (i know sry.. but i might think about the others if i get in.. but i want to layer my essay so that both schools will be proud)</p>