<p>witty structure. the story is interesting as well, it's about the reform of character.
anyone interested?</p>
<p>I’m interested for one. I’m also applying to Penn (ED) and I’ve already written my awe-inspiring essay…</p>
<p>I’m gonna tell you honestly that I’m only scaling up the competition. I won’t be stealing your idea/ideas cause I think mine’s already great. I will still give you good feedback though.</p>
<p>If you don’t want to send, there’s no hard feelings. </p>
<p>Good luck to the both of us!</p>
<p>If you want me to read your essay, send me an email ( <a href="mailto:khk0036@hanmail.net">khk0036@hanmail.net</a> )</p>
<p>I will comment on it :)</p>
<p>I would love to read it</p>
<p>Same, I will read it if you PM me and give feedback.</p>
<p>ill read it if u want</p>
<p>i’d love to take a look, send it here!
EDIT: While on the topic of UPenn, I’d like to point out that I have 217 posts right now lol. Page 217, anyone? :)</p>
<p>Hey, I’ll read it and give some feedback. I’m not applying to UPenn</p>
<p>Hey, I’ll take a look at it =)</p>
<p>Hey, PM me, I’ll be happy to help!</p>
<p>PM it o me if you want an honest critique :)</p>
<p>pm me, i will be happy to look at it. im not a penn applicant lol</p>
<p>If you want, I can read it and give you some honest advice and opinions. I’m applying to UPenn Regular Decision, so I might send you mine for review later on. xD.</p>
<p>PM it to me I’ll read over it and critique it! :)</p>
<p>I’ll critique your essay if you’d like, PM me</p>
<p>PM ill look at it.</p>
<p>Pm and Id give u some feedback</p>
<p>I will critique your essay…pm me…also if you want could you please read my essay for review.</p>
<p>pm me I will give a critique</p>
<p>PM it to me also if you want me to give some suggestions.</p>