Hi, I need some serious help with my essay

College Essays
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<p>Hello, Im Eric Lee a freshman at Loyola University Chicago and I'm applying for transfer to Yale, Mich, Brown, Cornell and UofI</p>

<p>I have been working on my personal statement, roughly 900 words and was wondering if there are any students, alumni, professionals that are interested in helping me develop and finish this essay.</p>

<p>I have revised this for many hours, and have my sweat into it so I would thank anyone for helping me out.</p>

<p>I do not want to post it on the thread for reasons of privacy but will be glad to email (cannot pm cuz of length). Thank You</p>

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<p>can someone help me please</p>

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<p>sure il help out</p>

<p>u can email me at <a href="mailto:yongbinkwon@gmail.com">yongbinkwon@gmail.com</a></p>

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<p>thank you very much… much more help would be appreciated from the myriad qualified readers</p>

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<p>hey, I wouldn’t mind helping you out. PM me if you want :D</p>

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pm me</p>

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<p>sure pm, me alot of free time now XD</p>

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<p>I go to Mich so I could tell you what I think about that particular essay</p>

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<p>You can PM me too!</p>

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<p>you can pm me also, and ill give you my email</p>

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<p>sure, you can pm me</p>