Hi, I would appreciate it if someone could critique my essay.

<p>A last minute plea for someone (anyone?) to peruse my essay and provide constructive criticism. All help is appreciated. Post here so I can PM the essay to whomever wishes to provide his or her services.</p>

<p>Specifically this is the CommonApp Essay.</p>

<p>Prompt: Describe a character in fiction, a historical figure, or a creative work (as in art, music, science, etc.) that has had an influence on you, and explain that influence.</p>

<p>go ahead; I'll take a look.</p>

<p>sure i can....np</p>

<p>Sure, if you PM it to me.</p>

<p>I'd love to read it.
People tell me I provide good and honest commentary.
Email me at: <a href="mailto:confusedcalcstudent@yahoo.com">confusedcalcstudent@yahoo.com</a></p>

<p>i'll read and critique it</p>

<p>I'd be happy to read it... if you’re worried about people stealing your essay feel free to email me at my school account... but i would prefer a pm</p>

<p><a href="mailto:sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu">sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu</a></p>