<p>Yes, this should technically be under the collge essay forum, but I put it here because in the tips on how not to get your essay ripped off, it said its better to ask adults who aren't dealing with the same intense stress and competitive nature as seniors students to review your essay. So I'm hoping some of you will help me out and read penn essay. Its one of those "why blank college" . Thanks so much and if you wan to read and give me feedback, just let me know to pm you. Thanks and good luck to your child/children in getting into whatever college they want to go to!</p>
<p>ps-my essay is still in sort of a raw form-so feel free to be blunt</p>