<p>I finished with the first prompt, and I would like to ask for your help in editing my UC essay.</p>
<p>Though I may be new at this, I would like established posters and non-new people to critique my essay.
I am open to any sorts of constructive criticisms.</p>
<p>Thank you very much!</p>
<p>I’ll read it. I have experience on UC essays.</p>
<p>@isu383: don’t trust SATnoob. he/she is also trying to apply!</p>
<p>@student_2012: Ahh thank you very much for telling me!</p>
<p>Anyone willing to give it a read? 
Unless you fellow peers are busy…</p>
<p>Well, I wouldn’t say I’m untrustworthy because I am also applying to a UC. I will help though. You can read mine if you wish.</p>
<p>just browse through this list:
<a href=“http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/college-essays/552302-consolidated-list-essay-readers-cc.html[/url]”>http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/college-essays/552302-consolidated-list-essay-readers-cc.html</a></p>
<p>I’m sure you’ll be able to find one person who would be willing to read through your personal statement and provide you with some feedback.</p>
<p>Okay! Thanks!</p>