High School Question

<p>Hey I am a sophomore in high school and the year has just started but im so worried! There are many clubs that are now accepting applications like DECA, Model UN etc and I applied. However none of them have accepted me and I've applied to at least a dozen things. Posted below is my Model UN applcation. Can you tell me what I'm doing wrong?
Thanks so much in advance!</p>

<p>Why do you think you would be an ideal member for Model United Nations?</p>

<p>I believe I would be an ideal member for Model UN as I first and foremost care about the global issues impacting our world today. Personally, since I have never before been involved in something global like Model UN and I would gladly welcome this opportunity to show my determination to make a difference. To me, Model UN represents the key to making a difference in the world and creating future leaders. In order to do this, Model UN obviously requires strong minded individuals with logical thinking and public speaking skills. I believe I would be an excellent candidate for the club as I love public speaking! Having participated in debates before, I understand the importance of quick and logical thinking. I hope to use these skills at Model UN to enhance my learning experience and absorb information efficiently. I understand that most of Model UN procedure requires problem-solving skills. All of the conflict resolution depends on these critical skills. I had an opportunity of resolving conflicts, being in a role of “meidator” among children while volunteering at elementary schools and summer camps. My experiences till have prepared me to face the bigger challenges that I may come across at the Model UN. I look forward to be part of this great club and participate in Model UN conferences with even greater people!</p>

<p>What do you hope to gain from participating in the club?</p>

<p>I hope to gain a variety of things from participating in Model UN. Firstly, I
am interested in getting involved in the global issues happening right now. In our fast-paced world, I believe it is crucial to be globally aware. At Model UN, I hope to deepen my knowledge and understanding of the serious issues affecting nations today. I want to better understand the fundamental reasons causing these problems. In addition, I hope this knowledge will provide me with a more informed perspective and outlook on the current issues of the world. This will make me better equipped to resolve conflicts at Model UN. Moreover, by joining Model UN I also hope to gain even more public speaking experience through participating in debates! Most of all though I look forward to meeting like-minded individuals and broadening my social circle! However, as I mentioned before, I really believe Model UN is a great opportunity for youth looking to make a difference. With this in mind, I only hope to get the opportunity through Model UN to show my concern for the troubling issues affecting our world today, and come together to help understand and resolve these conflicts.</p>