(Hopefully) Thought-provoking philosophical essay

College Essays
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<p>So the deadline for one of my colleges (I won't say which, I'll just say it's very high in the ranking and very important to me) is Jan 1st, and as much as I love my fellow high school students and AP Eng. 4 teacher, I need a lot of eyes to at least comment on this essay.</p>

<p>I hope that even if you don't have any suggestions, that you can tell me if it works or not. If you decide to read it, I'll send over the prompt and you might be able to tell me how effectively I related my point.</p>

<p>Thanks a lot, guys. Oh, and for privacy reasons, I have to say only 150 posts +, sorry.</p>

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<p>Sounds interesting. I'd like to read it and tell you what I think. PM it to me.</p>

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<p>I'll take a look.</p>

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<p>I'll give it a shot.</p>

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<p>I'd love to take a look</p>

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<p>i'll read it</p>

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<p>email it to me ;)</p>

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<p>philosophical essay?</p>

<p>PM it. =)</p>

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<p>I want my thoughts to be provoked.</p>

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<p>Sure, I love philosophy! Go ahead and PM it to me and I'll give you some constructive feedback.</p>