Hot off the press! Good topic here.

College Essays
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<p>I literally just wrote this essay, and I was hoping I could get some critique or editing. It's about 900 words, which I knew is long. I didn't take the time to look over the essay too much or trim some stuff out due to it being the first of many drafts. I mostly just want to know if it is at least worthy of me spending more time on, or if I should find a new topic.</p>

<p>If you see grammar errors, feel free to tell me, but I'm not interested in those as much right now as I am about the actual potential of my essay. It's definitely informal.</p>

<p>It's personal (as it should be) so I am a little bit afraid that's boring.</p>

<p>If you are willing to take a look, post here, please!</p>

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<p>I’d love to read it! I’m Class of 2014 and was accepted to my first choice as well as several other prestigious schools, and I feel my essays had a lot to do with it.</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look :)</p>

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<p>Also, I have to send it in two halves.</p>

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<p>send it over</p>

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<p>i wanna read! pm it over please :)</p>

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<p>I’ll look.</p>

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<p>I’ll give it a read.</p>

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<p>ill look. what colleges are you apping to?</p>

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<p>Due to my success, I have started trimming it. Anyone who posts here after this announcement will be sent a different version than the original. Which version it is just depends on when it is that I send it : ).</p>

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<p>Ill look at it :)</p>

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<p>i’ll look at it also :)</p>

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<p>I’ll look at it. I’ve helped many other’s on this site, and they have found my advice quite useful (you can check my profile).</p>

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<p>I’ll Like to look at it (:</p>

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<p>My apologies for not sending it. My essay is in a temporary state of editing unsuitable for actual reading.</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look!</p>