<p>Hey, i just wrote an essay on the topic that was on my review material
It took me almost 30 minutes... i know this is over-timed.
How do u guys think about this? ( this is exactly what it is)</p>
<p>Topic :Consider carefully the following statement(s) and the assignment below it.
"The greatest griefs are those we cause ourselves."
-Sophocles
Assignment: What do u think of the view that the worst sorrows are those for which we are responsible? In an essay, support your postition by discussing an example(s) from literature, science and technology, the arts, current events, or your own experiece or observation.</p>
<p>My essay: </p>
<pre><code> Sometimes people get confused with the feeling of sorrow and that of fear. This is because they are afraid to recognize that those two emotions are closely related. To clarify this, if we take an example of a child whose parent has recently passed away, the child may suffer from both feelings of sadness and great fear. Therefore, one can say that fear comes from the extreme sadness or vice versa.
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<p>Last summer, i went to Six Flags America amusement park with my two cousins and brother. I was the youngest among them and was planning to ride only the things that are not that scary. However, as soon as we entered through the entrance gate, my way of life has completely changed. They started to ask people what is the scarest thing in this park, and to my surprise, these stranger were so kind that they gave us away their map and told my two cousins where these are located. It didnt take long to realize that my brother was also one of these evil lord that would take pleasure in foring me to ride it together. My strengths were too weak to resist against these three people. The time that it took find "Superman" was short, but as for me, it seemed like an hour.</p>
<p>I cannot recall how exactly i was scared, but rather i remember how sad i was at that moment. I started to symphatize my destiny, for that i was known with these two people for a long time and i happily agreed to come the amusement park with them. When they told me that they are actually scared too, it only made the situation worse.</p>
<p>No matter how i plead to them, there was no escaped. Then, the time came and i nervously checked my seatbelt. At that point, i almost gave up my life. However, with my surprise i found it that it was actually fun.</p>
<p>This recent experience makes me to agree with Sophocles, for he was the one that said "The greatest griefs are those we cause ourselves." This statement is definitely true because neither my two cousins nor my brother made me worry. I was really making things that would make me suffer. Therefore and again, I have no doubt about the statement that the worst sorrows are those for which we are responsible.</p>