We all know writing about your beloved grampa’s war exploits won’t get you far.
“What’s important to you” or “your voice” don’t change this to a free choice essay for your English teacher. Adcom-speak is generally positive and encouraging. But for top colleges, a lot of this is about how one thinks. That includes how they understand what the college looks for. Your voice, but the rght message.
I liked the Hamilton essay samples. I agree they seem mighty polished, exceptionally so. But I could see traits in there that strike a chord.