How is my Curriculum Vitae? Should add more or shorten it?

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<p>Hi,
I'm sending this to Switzerland Hotel Schools, and I just wanted to know if I should add more details or shorten something. I cut out the personal information part. Thank you.</p>

<p>Curriculum Vitae
EDUCATION BACKGROUND</p>

<p>• March 1994 – June 1999 Mun-baek Elementary School
• August 1999 – June 2000 Salt Lake Elementary School
• August 2000 – June 2002 Moanalua Middle School
• August 2002 – May 2006 Moanalua High School</p>

<p>PERSONAL / WORK EXPERIENCE</p>

<p>• June 2005 – Present Holiday Inn Waikiki, Intern [330 Hours]
• October 2005 – Present Mene Mart, Sales Associate
• September 2005 – Present St. Pius X Roman Catholic Church, Acolyte [Every Saturday]
• April 2005 Travel Industry Management Luau 2005, Technical Support
• June 2004 – March 2005 Kaiser Permanente, MRI-Diagnostic Imaging – Volunteer [160 Hours]
• July 2003 – August 2003 Aiea Public Library, Volunteer
• June 2001 – Present Clarinettist, Concert Band (9), Symphonic Band (10, 11), Central District Honor Band (11), Symphonic Wind Ensemble (12)
• SCHOOL CLUB ORGANIZATIONS DECA: An Association for Marketing Student Secretary (12), Korean Cultural Club Secretary (10, 11, 12), Photography Club Treasurer (12), Travel Industry Management Club (11)</p>

<p>LANGUAGES SPOKEN</p>

<p>• Korean Mother Tongue
• English Fluent, Educated in U.S. since 1999
• Japanese Basic, High School 3 Years Course</p>

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<p>take off the elementary and middle schools- its totally irrelevant.</p>

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<p>huskem,
thank you for your opinion.
is the rest okay?</p>

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<p>bump..............</p>

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<p>First, it's a resume; a curriculum vitae in the United States is lengthier and is typically different from the Commonwealth English version of a CV. A curriculum vitae is typically used for academic scholars as their resume to list their published works, etc.</p>

<p>Second, it should be "Native Speaker of the Korean Language" or something along those lines; mother tongue is.. just ... odd.</p>

<p>Third, it should be "Three Years' Coursework" not "Three Years Course."</p>

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<p>tlaktan,
I'm sending this CV to Switzerland Hotel School and the college rep wanted only a page.</p>

<p>Oh about the format, when it's on Microsoft Word, there is about gap of two tabs between language.</p>

<p>ex: Korean Mother Tongue</p>

<p>Thank you for the comments. I'll fix it.</p>