How is my essay?

College Essays
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<p>Will you please read my essay and give me some suggestions. Thanks</p>

<p>I will PM it to anyone thats interested</p>

<p>I really appreciate it</p>

2

<p>yae sure.. PM it to me.. ill take a look :)</p>

3

<p>I’ll take a look.</p>

4

<p>any more opinions??</p>

5

<p>I’d be happy to read it. Just PM it to me. :)</p>

6

<p>i’ll take a look too</p>

7

<p>I’ll take a look :P</p>

8

<p>ill take a look</p>

9

<p>ye ill take a look too</p>

10

<p>I wanna check PM me</p>