How is my essay?

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It’s definitely possible; remember AcademicHacker’s Guide?</p>

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Why do u feel that? I can safely see it is written by a student who put effort into the essay.</p>

<p>I would give it a 9 or 10 out of 12, maybe an 11, since it lacks a fully developed/long conclusion, and the reasons should be developed more, since you are, in essence, using only 2 reasons. Good job though, with a little more practice, you could sure score 11-12. </p>

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It produced many positive results.</p>

<p>EDIT: Actually, your reasons are developed well, but I think you should add another strong reason/strengthen your conclusion.</p>