<p>Thanks so much for your advice and critique!
I really appreciate it 
I’m actually just entering 9th grade, but I have asian parents who are big on studies, so here I am. </p>
<p>I didn’t use wikipedia, it just happened that I’m a bit of a news junkie, and I followed the health care debate a lot. </p>
<p>I also like to write, so its a good combination :)</p>
<p>I’ll keep on writing, thanks again :)</p>
<p>Oh, and Suleyman, I happen to be a girl, thank you very much…</p>