<p>i'm guessing 750 words is a bit too much? i cant help it, i LOVE Duke. I think it says 1-2 paragraphs. :/ It's technically only three but they're long...
what do you think?</p>
<p>i think you should try to cut out pieces that aren’t necesary. Perhaps there are redundant sentences. </p>
<p>Try to make the essay closer to 500 words, or whatever the max is. Also, make sure the essay won’t get cut off when you submit it.</p>
<p>could you read over my essay?</p>
<p>yeah… if you wanted to send it to me i could try to look at it… i cant make any promises though because im super busy and the dealines are coming up… but i will probably read it if you send it 
and thanks for the advice</p>