How much score would i get for the essay??

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<p>Sup Guys!, so basically i wrote (2pages - 5 lines at the end) with one sentence conclusion.
Topic was 'Does having too much information about the public figures distract us from important issues?' </p>

<p>So my intro was fine, in my body i wrote how bill gates invested a lot of money into GM food in order to solve the world hunger crisis. And his behavior motivated a lot of people who pursued justice and equality. My second body was Kanye West. I wrote even though kanye west present a arrogance in his songs, the conversation about his actions and conducts means that his fans or the public is having a temporary joy about talking him. So its merely entertainment than a distraction. and one conclusion. </p>

<p>How much do you think i would get out of 12?? probably 7? :(</p>

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<p>How elevated was your diction? Did you vary your sentence structure and punctuation? Lastly, what was your vocab like?</p>

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<p>my vocab was good and i varied sentence structures, it was decent overall, so?? :)</p>

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<p>I wrote an outstanding 4 paragraph essay (imo) and it was 1.1pages or so. That net me a 4 per reader so I’m assuming length has a huge role in this. My friend wrote huge and filled up both pages; he got 5 from each reader. I wrote bigger and a 5 paragraph essay so I’m going to see if my theory is proven. How long was your essay? I write extremely legibly and neat so it’s hard af to write big.</p>

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<p>Would it make sense if I wrote about how challenges and obstacles (instead of contentment) create improvement?</p>