How strong of a hook is this?

Applying to College Common and Coalition Application
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<p>I'm a musician and I've recorded over 30+ songs by myself and with a few friends (they're quality songs, it isn't like we didn't put any effort into them)</p>

<p>Also I did an internship where I followed a musician around and learned from him and things like that</p>

<p>Guitar for 6 years
Drums for 7 years</p>

<p>Is this a good hook, or even a hook at all?</p>

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<p>I would not say it is a hook. It is an interesting extracurricular that you should definitely discuss in your applications. And possibly send a supplement (but NOT a long/lot of stuff, shorter one) of your best song. It could help if you want to attend a school with a conservatory and major in music.</p>