Please let me know which of these activities I should alter or delete. I have spent a large amount of time devoted to each of these activities; I just do not want to seem like a dilettante. I would also appreciate general comments/opinions related to these activities. Thank you!
Varsity Field hockey - 10, 11, 12
Varsity Track - 10, 11, 12
Spanish Club Vice President
English Club/Writing Center Vice President
Student Council Officer
Model UN - (at Yale, Colgate, and University of Maryland)
Website and iOS development for local politicians
Camp Counselor at Museum
Internship for Economic Development Committee (created advertising product used by city)
Volunteer Tutor at Boys & Girls Club (considering deleting this one).
There is nothing wrong with this list. You look like a busy teenager with broad interests. There is nothing wrong with that at all in the college admissions process.