<p>Now that I have your attention, please post in this thread or PM if you would be so kind as to read my common app essay! Thanks in advance, and sorry about the gimmicky thread title :D</p>
<p>I’ll read it! What school is it for?</p>
<p>I’ll read it! PM IT</p>
<p>Thanks guys, I PM’d the link.</p>
<p>PM me the link. I’ll be glad to look it over.</p>
<p>PM Also! Would like to give feedback too :D</p>
<p>It’s really good. The introduction was attention-catching, there are only a few punctuation mistakes. You can emphasize how humble you became after that incident.</p>
<p>@Purpledino Thank you! And will try to brainstorm ideas on more of the effects that it had on me.</p>
<p>I’ll edit it within a day or two, PM me!</p>
<p>Thanks for acknowledging my comments Ivygolfer! 
I hope that helped you a lot :]</p>
<p>@alwayswonderines
Loved your comments they were a major help!! What did you think of the essay in general?</p>
<p>PM I will look at it and give a feedback!</p>
<p>@Ivygolfer I think your essay really had a nice kick to it. Like your writing style was interesting and I wasn’t bored and I didn’t think it was a stereotypical essay. It was just the resolution that was a little confusing. However that’s a minor change. Still really good 
good luck</p>
<p>I’ll read it… then copy and paste it and apply to the same colleges as you with it!!!</p>
<p>^jk. I’ll take a stab at critiquing it though, if you still want help : ).</p>
<p>PM it to me and I’ll look at it and be sure to give you copious comments. ^^</p>
<p>PM it to me. I’ll give feedback:)</p>
<p>Bump… 10char</p>
<p>PM it to me too I will critique it</p>
<p>PM me too. I’ll read it and send you feedback!</p>
<p>I’ll read it too! based off of the previous comments its a pretty decent essay!</p>