How to IMPROVE PARAGRAPHS?

<p>Seriously. This is currently my worst section. I consistently get 5 out of 6 wrong (dunno why..)</p>

<p>But yeah, any tips? Beside treat the sentence like a identifying sentence errors or improving sentences?</p>

<p>thanks :)</p>

<p>Think of the sentence as if you were writing the essay. Of course you want to make the essay flow so just make sure it would work. Make sure it would be follow where the sentence prior and after would flow. Sorry if that’s a bit confusing.</p>

<p>thanks! I didn’t really understand tho… But I tried to make the sentence revision flow… kinda…</p>