How to make this 10 (5x2) essay into a 12 (6x2)?

<p>At my test prep, our essays are graded by one person. What does she mean exactly by transitions (last page comment)? End of paragraph or introductory transitions? . I really want to get a 12 tommorow, so your guys' advice would be greatly appreciated.</p>

<p>PROMPT: Should people who are working on projects always follow a clear outline?</p>

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<p>Thanks guys!</p>

<p>anyone, tips, suggestions? pros/cons?</p>