How to make this essay more personal?

College Essays
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<p>Hey guys,</p>

<p>I already posted this in the Rutgers forum and kind of got an idea what to write about for this prompt, but I'm having trouble connecting it back to me, instead of going "here all all the things you know about Rutgers that I love too!"
I know I can say academics are great, diversity is amazing - this will all help me in Business..
but as far as making it interesting? I guess I just want to make sure I stand out..</p>

<p>Please use the space below to tell us how you believe a Rutgers education will help you achieve your personal enrichment or career goals.</p>

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<p>Any advice…?</p>

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<p>Rutgers’ deadline was a month ago I thought…</p>

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<p>I checked the website and the above poster is correct: Rutgers had a December 1 deadline.</p>

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<p>This is for a transfer application, deadline is January 31st.</p>