How's my essay?

<p>I spent a lot of time writing this essay. It's a bit different from my usual style...but I hope to get some feedback on it. The prompt is essay option 2. I just want to know if it's understandable and maybe not too confusing. I appreciate any type of response. Thanks in advance.</p>

<p>anyone? bump...</p>

<p>Instead of sharing your essay online, I suggest you show it to a teacher, family member, or friend.</p>

<p>i'll read it</p>

<p>You can PM it over if you'd like, I'll take a look at it and give some hopefully helpful comments :)</p>

<p>you can PM me. but i am not applying to U Chicago so I don't know what the prompt is.</p>

<p>go ahead and PM me if you like</p>

<p>i'd love to give feedback. i'm applying RD, though, so while i promise not to rip you off, i'll totally understand if you dont want to PM it :)</p>