Prompt is, “Why do you have an interest in this Health care field? Please discuss any experiences you’ve had in this field.”
I agree with all of you that this is HIS essay, and I appreciate the wisdom of advice given here that if results return unsatisfactory will be devastating (more to me probably than him). Couple classmates & a teacher have looked at the essay but … I will tell him, that WHEN he submits these essays, he needs to feel like it is HIS best work and be confident. But I just needed to hear some advice as for the essay, he is very open to suggestions. Thank you all.