<p>I've written two pieces, one for the common app, and one supplementary for Harvard, Yale and Princeton.</p>
<p>One is about my large family and the other is about my heritage.</p>
<p>Would someone like to read and comment on them, and/or give an opinion of whether it will help/hurt chances?</p>
<p>I'd read it :).</p>
<p>sure I'll read it as well, u can just PM me</p>
<p>id read it if u like</p>
<p>PMed you guys.. would anyone else be willing?</p>
<p>i'll read it, pm it over</p>
<p>yeah same, pm it over</p>
<p>Actually it's too long for me to PM the essay.... So PM me your email and I'll send it through there.</p>
<p>Any help from anyone is appreciated.</p>
<p>sure i;ll read</p>
<p>ill read it too!</p>
<p>I'll read them.</p>
<p>I'll help with what i can, PM me.</p>
<p>sure..do you want general feedback/impression?</p>
<p>i like your user name. i just wrote a creative essay on socrates waking up from the dead.</p>
<p>I'll look at it.</p>
<p>ill have a look, just PM me</p>
<p>why not?
<a href="mailto:daboasha@yahoo.com">daboasha@yahoo.com</a></p>
<p>sure just pm me it</p>
<p>I'd love to read it.</p>
<p>I'll read it!</p>