HYPS Hopeful In Need of Critique

College Essays
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<p>Hello! I am applying to HYPS and I'd really appreciate if I could get some criticism on my essay in its current form. It is on the "significant experience" Common App topic. PM or post here - no 2015ers please!</p>

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<p>PM it over! I’m in college.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it. PM me.
I’ll give you some feedback.</p>

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<p>I’d love to read</p>

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<p>bump 10char</p>

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<p>I will edit for content and grammar.</p>

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<p>I’d love to look it over.</p>

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<p>I’ll give it a read.</p>

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<p>I’d love to read it as well, PM it over please.</p>

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<p>PM it to me if you still need help.</p>

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<p>Will read. I have a son in an HYP.</p>