<p>Dear Academic Progress Committee,</p>
<p>Im writing this letter to appeal the decision to academically dismiss me from SUNY Plattsburgh. I do not blame anybody but myself for the situation Im currently in right now. Over the course of the two semesters that Ive been at SUNY Plattsburgh, my grades have been affected by many different obstacles and personal challenges. </p>
<p>My first semester was really tough for me socially and academically. It was an 8 hour drive away from home. I have never been this far from home alone before so it wasnt easy adjusting. The weather, the town and the campus were all different from anything I had ever experienced before. A really strange problem I had was with showering. Every single time I showered in the dorms, I would be really itchy for about 20 minutes. I tried everything from changing laundry detergent, body wash, bed sheets, and towel and still the problem persisted. My roommate didnt have this problem and neither did any of my other floor mates. Very early on in the school year, I was involved in an incident one night which resulted in me getting written up. Not being much of a drinker, I went to a party one night and I had too much to drink. The drink was a mixture of many, and it contained many different things including some I had no idea about. I was fine when leaving the party but as soon as I got outside the next thing I knew I was on the floor. I was helped back into my dorm but for some reason I couldnt calm down. My heart rate was too fast and I was too energetic. According to some, I was really loud. My RA was scared because according to him he had never seen anyone behave like that after drinking. Alcohol is a depressant and its supposed to calm you down and I was completely opposite of calm. He called 911 and I was written up for making noise around the time of quiet hours. I was put on judicial probation for the remainder of that semester. I learned my lesson that night though, and as the records will indicate, I was never involved in drinking or such behavior again. When I was told to go see an alcohol counselor, she said that Im not someone who has problems with alcohol or is addicted to it so in-fact I only met with her for just one session. She said the only abnormal thing was how high my heart rate was. Academically I had my share of problems as-well. I was really challenged by the courses I was taking because high school didnt prepare me too well for the rigorous demand of college. To make things worse, I was a declared Biology major with the intention of pre-med. One subject I had trouble with in particular was Chemistry. It was strongly recommended by my Chemistry professor that I take a remedial basic version of the Chemistry course otherwise I might struggle with the course. Unfortunately, that class started a bit later than it was intended to so I fell behind in the fundamentals of Chemistry course by the time it finally stared. I then had no other option but to withdraw from the Chemistry course. Fortunately, I was able to finish out my first semester with a decent GPA of a 3.11 despite taking a light course load. </p>
<p>Just when I thought everything was fine, my second semester at Plattsburgh took me by storm. With all the lessons I learned from that first semester, I really started out the spring semester with a bang! I completely changed around my lifestyle and my study habits by putting school first and facing the semester with a lot of determination. I often received several comments from people about this change. My roommate would often say to me Man, I wish I had your motivation. </p>
<p>My mid-term grades were:</p>
<p>EnglishB+
MusicB+
HistoryD+
BiologyD </p>
<h2>ChemistryE </h2>
<pre><code> GPA: 1.7
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<p>Factoring that 1.7 into my cumulative of 3.11 would have come out to a 2.16 cumulative GPA which wouldnt have put me in danger of academic dismissal. Those mid-term grades were mostly all based on one exam and a few assignments. The way I was working meant that there was more than hope for my grades to improve. Those B+s in English and Music could have turned into As. The D in Biology might have possibly gone up to a C+ or better. Unfortunately, despite this step in the right direction to start off the semester, I made two decisions which turned out to hurt me more in the end than help me. Firstly, I took more credits than I could handle and secondly, I declared a minor. Even though I was staying in and taking charge of my school work, I started to struggle to keep up with the pace that my courses demanded. As we progressed through the content, the material in the class started to get harder and some of the courses required more time outside of class in-order to stay on top of the material. With very little experience in such an academic situation, it all started get overwhelming for me. I didnt know how to study for every single course every day. I worked out different schedules and time tables but neither seemed to work for me. It got to a point where I decided, I would spend the early part of the day immediately after class working on English, music, and the history course then sleep around 9 p.m. and wake up at 4 a.m. to study for Chemistry and Bio, until class time, since those were the courses I felt I needed to devote most of my time to. But it wasnt of much help. Sometimes, the assignments in English took me longer than I thought and I would end up having to sacrifice the time I planned to use to study for Chemistry and Biology for English. This contributed to me falling behind in Chemistry and Biology. My Chemistry course especially, because the class met twice a week, a lot of material was covered during the class period and every Tuesday there was either a test or a quiz. This was too demanding for me to handle. My grades started to decline. Coming from a background where my parents never went to college, they werent useful at all when I asked them for advice. My dad rather kept pushing and urging me to continue taking the 18 credits and my mom put pressure on me telling about a close family friend whose child graduated college in 3 years because of all the credits they took a semester. Because of this I didnt consider dropping a course. I continued to struggle more and more. I contacted most of my teachers and asked what it was I needed to do to stand a chance of passing the class? In Chemistry, I was told that I needed to get in the high 90s for all remaining exams and quizs. That was too tough of a task for me since I fell behind and catching up wasnt going to be easy. I then decided to channel my energy towards my remaining classes and do the best that I could do. I changed from studying in my room with loud music playing on my floor, and my roommate talking on the phone to a more quiet setting in the library and learning center. I tried really hard to make sure my cumulative GPA wouldnt fall below the 2.0 mark. There were times when I had very little sleep. Some days I was one of the last ones to leave the library. Unfortunately, in the end my efforts werent enough. Although I was close, I was unable to reach the 2.0 mark my cumulative GPA came to a 1.92. This for me was a really big blow. I really like this college, the town and the opportunities it has presented to me. Im one of the first in my family to attend college and this is such a dream come true not only for me but for my parents as-well. In the end, Ive tried my best to keep my head up and face whats ahead of me. Despite this academic tragedy so early on in my college career, I believe that if given a second chance, things will be different. All that has happened has shaped me up to become a matured college student. </p>
<p>I have dealt with all of the issues that I faced during the semester and Im now ready to try again. Ive learned better time management and productive study skills. Rather than my old method of trying to study for every course every day, I now know to break up the work into smaller parts. This allows me to learn the material at a pace thats good for me. Before, I tried to learn everything all at once which proved to be very ineffective thats why I was feeling overwhelmed. One very important issue that Ive tackled which I believe will make a really big difference if Im allowed to return back to school is that Ive gave deep thoughts into my major, my career goals, and Ive laid out a plan. My academic records show that my lowest grades the two semesters Ive been at SUNY Plattsburgh has been in the science courses. Carefully looking at my transcript will show that I took Chemistry twice receiving a W the first time and an E the second time. Although I might have the desire for a career in medicine, I dont think I have the academic capability to handle the rigor of science courses. And with my records at the moment, my chances at medical school are very slim. Before the semester ended, I went to my advisor with all these concerns and I spoke with her about it. She was nice enough to work with me and even gave me other possible majors, and careers I could consider. We discussed meeting graduation requirements to graduate on time, what I could do to stand a chance at med school, what to do with the difficulty I was facing with the science classes, and if changing majors to something else be a good idea. I told her I have the desire for medical school but I have to face reality because Im not good at the sciences. And she told me sincerely that she believes I can do it. She told me it looks like I was overwhelmed this semester taking more credits than I could handle. She went on to add that it would be a good idea if I dropped my music minor and focused strictly on the sciences. We then mapped out the courses that I need to take and should take in the upcoming semesters. Having this talk with her really helped me a lot. I made up my mind that I will drop my minor so that I could focus more on my science courses. Academically, with my GPA currently at a 1.92, my chances at medical school or a career in the medical profession isnt good. Ive figured that for the next semesters, If I can maintain a semester GPA of a 4.0, I will be able to get my cumulative to a 3.5 And being a science major, I will also have another GPA for science courses. My advisor told me about changing from a B.A. to a B.Sc. degree which will require me to take more upper level science courses. Upper level science courses will really play a big role in increasing my GPA. Raising my cumulative to a 3.5 by senior year will make me competitive for medical school. If I fall short, and I can at-least graduate with a cumulative GPA of 3.0 or better, it will earn me a spot in a post-baccalaureate program to increase my science grades to enter medical school. Im really optimistic because although my cumulative GPA may be low, theres more than hope for me if Im allowed to return to back to school. If re-instated, I will have 6 more semesters to raise my GPA. I am now matured and can handle college level work. </p>
<p>The time at SUNY Plattsburgh has really taught me a lot and has helped me to grow as a person and a student. I am much more matured now than when I first came to Plattsburgh. Being a first year college student, transitioning was a bit difficult at first, but now Ive come to understand and Ive learned essential skills like what studying methods work best for me. But I can only demonstrate this if given a second chance.</p>
<p>Im asking for an appeal to allow me to return back to school on academic probation. If given such a chance I will do things much differently than the first two semesters and fix up my academic record. Im a person who doesnt make the same mistakes twice. After my alcohol incident during the first semester, records will show that, I was never involved in anything of that nature again and I didnt repeat such actions. I believe with what Ive learned through experience this semester about perseverance, Ill be able to perform much better academically next semester. For one, I will not overwhelm myself with the amount of credits that I take. Ill make sure to take a reasonable course load that I can handle. Now that Ive learned what studying methods works best for me, my studies will be much more effective and productive because I will study smarter. Ill also take full advantage of the available helpful resources that are available like the learning center and Fienberg library. </p>
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<p>Look for grammatical errors as well as how to improve and make it much better. Thanks. Greatly appreciate it. I have 'til the 16th the submit this but I want to submit it earlier than that.</p>