I can't decide which to send!

College Essays
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<p>OK, so here's the problem. I've written two Common App personal statement essays, but I'm not sure which is better. One is more on the creative/humorous side, the other is much more the important personal experience type. I have concerns about both of them, but when it comes down to it, I like both of them. Unfortunately, that's essentially the response I've gotten from virtually everyone who's read both of them, though, so that's been no help. </p>

<p>I'm applying to primarily LACs: Midd, Bowdoin, Wellesley, Mt Holyoke, Conn College, Bryn Mawr, Swarthmore, Smith, Colby, and UMass Amherst. </p>

<p>Help?</p>

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<p>I'm not applying to any of those schools. I'd be glad to help.</p>

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<p>Happy to help.</p>

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<p>ill read them just send them=]</p>

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<p>PM me, I will probably finish reading it tmr and send you some feedbacks.. This is my first time reading essays on CC, so I suppose I can give some original opinions</p>

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<p>Which one is the most personal, detailed, honest and revealing?</p>

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<p>hey. im an 09er but im not applying to any of your schools. ill take a look if u need help</p>

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<p>Thanks for all the interest! I'll send them along...my computer generally can't really handle converting documents very well, so I hope just pasting them into the PM is okay. So annoying, I know :(</p>

<p>Hope to hear back from some of you soon!</p>

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<p>I will read them. Not applying. Already in College</p>

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<p>I'll read them...I'm also applying atm (not to any of those), but I've pretty much finished my essays anyway (and I have faith in my writing ability).</p>

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<p>I'll read them..I'm not applying to any of those schools.</p>

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<p>I'm graduating in '09, but I'm not applying anywhere on your list. I'd be glad to offer my opinion!</p>

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<p>I'll take a look</p>