I can't write. Help critique my essays?

<p>Well, I almost can't write. I am straightforward, and my writing is mechanical. </p>

<p>I don't feel like bs-ing. Give me some honest feedback please.</p>

<p>Sometimes i feel like the only thing keeping me away from a good college are my essays.</p>

<p>I need you to get my essay back to me before Saturday at 3pm.</p>

<p>Okay forget the deadline. THat was for early action.</p>

<p>I still need essay critiquers. And I was kidding, I’m not that horrible of a writer.</p>

<p>send me it</p>

<p>ill trade mine</p>

<p>Sure, I’ll get it done in a matter of minutes :P</p>

<p>But you’re both 09ers…</p>

<p>o well then if you dont need a fellow classmate critique</p>