<p>It needs editing grammatically.
The 1st time I read it, I broke down in tears.</p>
<p>wow this sounds intense! ill read it if you’d like</p>
<p>PM me if you don’t mind a 14’er.</p>
<p>Ya ill read/edit</p>
<p>sure, ill take a look for u.</p>
<p>Bump. 10 char.
This needs lots of editing; I don’t like the language of it. -.-</p>
<p>wow, really? I’m a year younger than you, so I’ll take a look at it. PM me if you want. :)</p>
<p>i’ll read it if you like…im editor of my school paper</p>
<p>I’ll read it and provide constructive criticisms.</p>
<p>I’ll read it. I have a low post count so I am not sure if you want me to but PM me if you’d like.</p>
<p>I would love to read it!</p>
<p>I’d love to read it. I’m a 14’er but I’ve finished my essays already.</p>