<p>Who can read it? I need help making it flow better and I also cant decide on what tense to write it in.</p>
<p>I’ll read it! And I’ll try to give you some advice, too, if I can.</p>
<p>i’ll give it a lookover.
E-mail me at <a href=“mailto:NKunkel@ucsd.edu”>NKunkel@ucsd.edu</a> or pm me.</p>