I feel like I'm emphasizing too much my shortcomings.

<p>My social awkwardness, to put it colloquially has always haunted me, and I'm my essay is essentially about how a man I met on an airplane helped me to be less afraid and nervous of people. </p>

<p>I'm afraid I come off as too nervous and scared, as the typical nerd who is socially challenged. Will this be bad?! Aghhhhhhhhh. Personally I thought it was a good idea at first but then again... blah.</p>

<p>I am willing to critique essays for people who will HONESTLY critique mine as well.</p>

<p>I’ll critique yours.</p>

<p>We can trade essays if you want; PM me.</p>