I feel sick about this essay

<p>its a personnal statment about the circumstances of my upbringing. Ive edited, added, and cut and got a lot of different feed back. </p>

<p>Some people have said it is powerful and moving.
Others have said it does not reveal enough about me.</p>

<p>I would be so grateful for any input.
thanks</p>

<p>i can read it for you :)</p>

<p>I don’t mind providing feedback.</p>

<p>Disclaimer: am an 09er</p>

<p>id love to read it!
im also an 09er but done my essay :)</p>

<p>09 here, but I’ve love to read it.</p>

<p>PM it to me.
or email me at: <a href="mailto:srrinath@gmail.com">srrinath@gmail.com</a><a href=“hint:%20i’m%20at%20my%20email%20more%20often”>/email</a></p>

<p>not an 09-er.</p>

<p>I’d be happy to read it. PM it over</p>

<p>if your still looking for readers i’ll give it a squiz… bored so trawling forums… this is what HSC does to you… I am an 09er but written my essays and really have no desire to change them!</p>

<p>PM me. I have nothing to do at the moment.</p>