I finished my UC essays. One's amazing and the other STINKS. Who wants to critique?

College Essays
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<p>Alright so I finished my UC essays. I think one of them is pretty good but the other one seems generic and stinky. Would anyone like to read and critique them for me? Thanks.</p>

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<p>I’ll fix both, I’m on a high after sending in my own earlier today. :]</p>

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<p>—bump—</p>

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<p>I’ll look at it.</p>

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<p>i’ll look at it.</p>

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<p>I can take a look and give you my comments. If you desire please PM me your eassays. tx</p>